Friday, November 27, 2015
Cupids Trumpeteer Comments
Rating: ★4.5
Maybe I'm a trumpets blast
Baby I'm gonna make it last
Standing cold and shivering
Loves warm touch left us quivering
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Kumarmani Mahakul
27 November 2015
Love touches the warmness. This is very fantastic poem shared definitely. Very amazing.10
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Shakil Ahmed
27 November 2015
Standing cold and shivering Loves warm touch left us quivering Beautiful poetic lines, well composed poem, thanks for shsring.
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7/27/2025 10:46:13 PM # 1.0.0
Enjoyed the poem. You are missing a few apostrophes in the first few lines: Maybe I'm a trumpets blast Baby I'm gonna make it last Standing cold and shivering Loves warm touch left us quivering Should be: Maybe I'm a trumpet's blast Baby I'm gonna make it last Standing cold and shivering Love's warm touch left us quivering Also in the title: Cupids Trumpeteer should be: Cupid's Trumpeter Sorry. I can't help it. I used to be an English teacher!
Thanks Kim, I will try to get around to editing it. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem