Friday, June 13, 2008

Cupid Wears A Mask Comments

Rating: 4.1

Cupid Wears A Mask

Angelic cherub
with face so devin.
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Dawn Slanker
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O Yes! ! ! The duality of the Art Of Eros.Lovely rhyme.A ten from me.

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Adeline Foster 09 September 2008

I liked the tongue- in-cheek of this one, very good. Adeline

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Manonton Dalan 09 September 2008

beautifully, truthfully written love it

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Linda Moore 22 August 2008

I like the description in this poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Love can be a trouble maker.

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Ron Flowers 27 July 2008

A really good poem, an enjoyable read. Ron

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 July 2008

cupid is cupid as clock never stays back it may be storm or ebbing tide never goes back heart when pierced blood yet chilled his cloack always glows as the moth turns into its fold, , , , , , , , , , , , , uniquely interesting poem bedecked with imagery unequalled, thought provoking, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

I thought you did a fine job of writing this once you go underway. The beginning was your problem. If you could fix that up a bit. This might have earned a 10 from me. Now that is tough! I have a poem named Cupid as well, but it is not posted. It is much different from this. I really liked this though. I would not be ashamed to have my name on this. GW62

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Viola Grey 14 June 2008

I love the feel of this peice...kind of classical, but still relevant...nice work

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