Cupid Wears A Mask
Angelic cherub
with face so devin.
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I liked the tongue- in-cheek of this one, very good. Adeline
I like the description in this poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Love can be a trouble maker.
cupid is cupid as clock never stays back it may be storm or ebbing tide never goes back heart when pierced blood yet chilled his cloack always glows as the moth turns into its fold, , , , , , , , , , , , , uniquely interesting poem bedecked with imagery unequalled, thought provoking, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
I thought you did a fine job of writing this once you go underway. The beginning was your problem. If you could fix that up a bit. This might have earned a 10 from me. Now that is tough! I have a poem named Cupid as well, but it is not posted. It is much different from this. I really liked this though. I would not be ashamed to have my name on this. GW62
I love the feel of this peice...kind of classical, but still relevant...nice work
O Yes! ! ! The duality of the Art Of Eros.Lovely rhyme.A ten from me.