Cupid's Sting Comments

With startling vividness when you come into me/Each time I feel the sweet sting of Cupid’s shafts! Great romantic expression! An endearing piece of work dear madam......Top score!

I kissed away the ambrosial liquid Inhaled your scent It filtered into all sinews of my being Seeping right down to my bone.. such beautiful romantic expressions that flows down from heart full of love. love your poems. tony

''In no way, I will barter this sweet ache For any other treasures of the world! '' - I love this two verses! This ode is of a refined poetic beauty, with images and emotions of such profundity, which only Love can reach! An exquisite poem!

Why don't you write such beautiful poems more, it's beautiful and wonderful.................10

This is a great Cupid's song! (10)

WOW' Valsa -It's a beautiful penning describing love bite. I write some few lines from one of my poems - Though it may be a sting from naughty Cupid, But undoubtedly that gives a tangy and sweet pain. A matured human heart yearns that arrow's sting To be penetrated again and again.

“And lifted me to an irrepressible buoyancy” ……. favorite line so far. [this is what happens when I eat too many beans! ] this borders on pornographic! my friend, Valsa, did not write THIS! DID SHE? ? ! [at least you withheld my name to protect me. thanks.] and Jayatissa had the nerve to use the word “maturity”! hmmph! ! name withheld to protect my honour/honor. :) p.s. they weren't 'virgin stars' for long, once i found them.

I sensed a tuneful melody in every cosmic beat I saw the universe painted in many hues....romantic feelings flow here and in every lines of the poem. Thrilling one. Many thanks for sharing.....10

Who else, other than a person of thickened poetic fibers, can reawaken romantic feelings of romantic youth, at maturity, so freshly, vividly and heartily. It's a beautiful portrait of a real romantic encounter. Enjoyed and its 10 from me.

V.G's heart opens out. the poets on love must withdraw in awe.