Cupid's Moon Eclipsed Comments

Once again, I stand amazed at your ability to maintain the rhyme scheme for such a L-O-N-G poem! This poem puts me in mind of feelings I held for my precious fiance' Ed, who died of cancer before we could marry. It was like being at a banqueting table, and barely having time to sample the canapes and hors d'oeuvres, before being dragged from the room without ever having tasted the main course! Yes, I can relate. Thank you Brett for sharing from the heart!

The title is so interesting that calling me to read it, and reading it i think lot of artistic, poetic lines that really represented by the title, i mean that is a cool poem of how emotion can craft can order art to grow on a paper. A well done work! , and nice advice/reminder at the end...