Monday, August 13, 2012

Cupid's Folly Comments

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through the mind numbing fog
her crystal blue light houses
appeared before me
deeply penetrating my pale
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Edwin Baldwin
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Adeline Foster 31 August 2012

Very good free verse. Liked the thought of a 'moaning ear', even thought I have never heard one. Read mine - Memory is a Cheating Thing - Adeline

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