Savage little naked fool
with puny weapons of love
fly yourself to another heart
before I snap your wings.
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Simply the greatest poem i've on this site so far...i need not say more
The sting of his arrow that never leaves; either bringing joy or sadly sorrow! Your advice to Cupid is very well put, although I feel you are a romantic at heart and when you are ready it too will return!
he will get you again, thats when you kick the...... out of him.regards Tom 10/10
How can you not like a poem that threatens to rip the wings off a little angel...still laughing...Coach
Alas, he'll aim at you again when you're not looking. And that's when he's most dangerous! Wonderfully sardonis piece. Fx
i love it. a definite 10! ! keep writing...i like this aggressiveness.
Good work here Viola... Looks as if everyone agrees,10! ! ! ! !
lol you tell him good and proper viola, there is no one more dangerous than a wounded lover....smiling at you, Tai
Point poison arrows at me again and feel the wrath I reap and I will be right there with her... Ya go gettem Viola! ! ! lol. this made me smile. very good job. Becca