Cupboard Love Comments
A mouse lived in a dingy cupboard,
Not the cupboard of Old Mother Hubbard,
But a horrid closet, non the less,
Which caused him unrelenting stress,
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excellent! bravo..you are a genius! . I feel drowsy, but twas gone after reading this and laugh and laugh..Hope i can write like this, too..Oh, that's why they all love you very much and very popular! now i know! top marks, of course! hugs, Meggi
Oh how sweet......a mice one, Ernestine, ....sorry, I mean a NICE one. Love, Fran xx
That's what I call a story with a happy ending or should I say the trimph of 'mousy life'. Brilliant.
Aim becomes clear, and I loved the humour element and the thought of finding someone to love, whilst stumbling in the dark.Love Duncan
Absolutely fabulous! I have joined in with the other ten's! I really need to go, however, I shall return to feast myself on your wonderful words. God bless. Anabelle
Very witty & humorous story. I love it. Like the Old Mother Hubbard stories, but in verse. The rhymes give the poem an additional touch of humorous irony, & one cannot but feel sympathy for the character. Thanks for this great read.
Very sweet, I hope everyone finds his or her perfect mouse.
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7/29/2025 2:50:41 AM # 1.0.0
A very beautiful work. Well crafted, wonderful structure, great rhymes and very witty. Well done. Andrew x