Cup Of Tea? Comments

Powerful stuff, I really liked these lines, She smiles Mistaking his sorrow for contentment He sees lost horizons in her smile Love that never speaks Seeing how hard it is for us to understand another person, to get through the mistaken meanings.

you my friend play on the heartsstrings like a virtuoso. a cup of tea the English answer to all problems Superb writing ivor aka poeticpiers

This is a very moving vignette that sums up such a lot of marriages and relationships that have changed their nature and become ambiguous for one partner yet not lost intensity for either. You have beautifully summoned up the quiet room, the crackling fire, and the suggestion of change to come for the dog is particularly subtle. Your choice of words and changes of rhythm are masterful.

Gorgeous! And so well told and so honest and so touching and so.... love Donall Donall

loved it! an impressive wordsmith... I shall remember your words. Many thanks AA Gordon :)

can i just say this is extremely good - and leave it at that.

STELLAR IMAGEWORK, bILL....I LIKE THE LANGUAGE EMPLOYED HERE, ALONG WITH THE THE WELL CRAFTED STRUCTURE, WHICH PROVIDES A SMOOTH FLUXION READ...JOB WELL DONE... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.