Wednesday, December 20, 2006

Cup Of Ashes Comments

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Cup of Ashes here tonight
Here to talk of my damnable plight
Lost in tears, lost in flight
Without sound, without sight
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Beggar Boy
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Jayanta Sengupta 05 January 2007

awesome poem man! ! ! ! it seems that ur heart and brain thinks and breaths the same feelings and thoughts which my mind does! ! i not only read ur poem but felt it man! !

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Patricia Gale 20 December 2006

Thought provoking, splendid rhyme, well done! Patricia

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Amanda Saveley 20 December 2006

This is a very profound poem...something good to read when one wishes to think. Excellent word choice, interesting rhyme, and the end...'Where depravity and Divinity come face to face, ' is such an interesting paradox...would be interesting to see how one affects the other.

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