Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Cumulonimbus Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smell of rain flows into the valley like mist.
Clouds hover above threatening to reveal their secret.
Familiar to death, all forest turn dark and silent.
Erie whispers show that the wind has arrived.
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Cecilia Skopec
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This is beautiful! Absolutly fantasic imagery! I really love the line ''Crowding every ear for miles around.'' Great!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

'Mix all the symptoms, you have created the love for a thunderstorm.' Marvelous write...

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Sameer Ahmed 24 June 2009

A beautiful imagery has been portrayed in this scenical poem. Very amazingly you have shown each and every peculiarity of a thunderstorm with all moves and shapes it make......10/10

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Cecilia Skopec

Cecilia Skopec

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