Culture Of Ithey/I. Comments

Excellent work, we do tend to fall into 'their' expectations, and so often, there is so much more out there than the expected. Lovely read, L&T

This is a great poem Mary; the line about pizza is great, conjouring up a modern feel to the whole piece. Sometimes it is odd how one word can make a piece. The problem lies with the last part, after 'madman'. It comes across as rushed and not thought through as well as the rest of the poem.

Mad or sane? Who cares? But just be YOU..........'they' don't count! Love the poem, Mary. Love, Fran xx

A good point, very well made. I really enjoyed this one and i loved that line about the pizza. Hugs Anna xxx