Cultural Fete Comments

this poem tells a lot that's happy thanks for sharing this poem congratulations!

I agree with the thoughts you placed on paper in this piece sir.

10+++++ Violence everywhere abhor, Peace and harmony adore; Beauty in diversity galore, Unity is diversity’s shore.

excellent poem with excellent topic..loved the way of writting..ejoyed it too..

Brilliant rhyming scheme and melody. The theme is also very steadily carried though the poem.10+. Thanks to PH.

Brilliant write with amazing melody. Love this message with 10.

Sounds more like a multi-cultural fete to me, where tolerance is at the forefront and kindness and love of difference shines. Your poem enjoys its rhymes and shares its message with authority and heart. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

GOOD IDEA ON CULTURAL DIVERSITY

Detailed and informative poetry. We in Australia are multicultural and have many celebrations to share the connection between people. Thank you for sharing yours with me. 10 Karin Anderson

a poem with a stong message. well-metered.

the detailed explanation of cultural fete is expressed here in your piece..naizz

An absolutely beautiful poem, my friend. I love the excellent rhyme and meter and what a message it delivers. We are certainly a world full of varied beliefs and colors but why oh why do we have so much trouble being friends. That's one thing I really love about PH, the feeling of a family relationship between people all over the world. Well penned indeed. Best wishes Richard

thought provoking..............very well penned sir..............

Good analogy with the Poemhunter community :) 'Why show big reading between the lines? Why we on One earth and sky draw lines? ' I wonder why we poets have to use lines and stanzas :) . Your poem make me think, where is the ballance between order, marked with lines and the freedom - with no lines and borders. How could diversity live in peace for longer... The poem is in accordance with the best humanistic traditions.

What a wonderful poem you have written, here on PH we are in touch with people from all over the world and colour and race and religion are not an issue, well said 10 Lynda xx

The poem has deep insight of the poet, it preaches perennial love, patience and tolerance, and it gives us the keys of successful splendid life on the planet. The poem is rich with aphorism and proverbial lines: Debate is the Truth’s soul mate. Violence everywhere abhor, Peace and harmony adore; Unity is diversity’s shore. The poem also has the highest moral, would that we all understand the truth, Why we on One earth and sky draw lines? Muhammad Shanazar

C.P. You paint a picture of how our world should work, if only this could be true; for to live in peace and harmony would surely make us full of love, much richer as more creative ideas abound across our open minds. Thank you for writing this.

True, what you have said. The world also is changing itself to the tune of the time. Otherwise, a black would never become a President of USA, as is now. Your poem speaks well of the need of the hour.

The net reduces the size of the global village day by day We communicate in a different and easy way We share ideas which we conceive and hope that others will believe We wish them well because we do. We have no reason not to A most enjoyable read my friend

Ment to be that way, until Satan deceived Eve.