Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Cultivate Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am your garden,
Cultivate me.
...............
Clear out all the doubt-weeds,
...
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Fay Slimm
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Gordon Wilkinson 25 July 2009

Inspiring piece enjoyed - 10

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C. P. Sharma 22 July 2009

I am your garden, Cultivate me. This is the bud that blooms into a flower with its fragrance and hue in the rest of the poem. Poetry par excellence.10++++++++ CP

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a wonderful poem...love and romance filled garden...great read

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Coreena Dejesus 18 July 2009

A wounderful write Fay! ++10! Hugs CC

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excellent warm poem..the most beautiful garden which nurtured by cariing and love, ..sweetly said poem So cultivate boundaries Smoothe indeed, ......... And waiting for seed Will be soil, that ploughed, Will fruit and flower again. .............................. You will certainly be amazed. Spoilage will never becloud Our horizon................. Nectar you'll sip.......... daily.

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Shashendra Amalshan 16 July 2009

oh! ! you are the most lovely plant indeed my dear lady.... lovely write as always Fay10 with loves shan

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Carl Harris 16 July 2009

This is a wonderfully well expressed poem, Fay, with a bit of double entendre thrown in for good measure. It is a most delightful read, especially for those gifted with the ability to read in-between the lines, and your enticing words are superbly romantic indeed! Carl.

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Bob Blackwell 16 July 2009

A beautiful garen Fay, the same care and love would work well with people too. Love Bobx 10 ++

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Smiley Hooker 14 July 2009

So amazing garden! It's exhibiting the true wonders of nature- anyone could be enchanted. A very charming poem! : -)

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Bob Gibson 14 July 2009

When the moon is bright, the time is right, for the sowing of the seed warmth and tenderness are needed, its generally agreed protection from harm and the elements, is a necessity only then will we reap the love we gave, that blooms eternally

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Lynda Robson 14 July 2009

The garden of love, cultivate then stand back and watch what happens, great write as always Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Ian Bowen 14 July 2009

Fay, a faultless piece of poetry. Love the use of the shorter lines. There is much to admire in the way you have used personification. A favourite read for me. Ian

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Fiona Davidson 14 July 2009

Wonderful piece Fay as always from you an excellent read...Fi 10+++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 July 2009

A loving plea to come to your garden Fay... Andy 10

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Carol Gall 14 July 2009

grand poem an amazing garden fay

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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