Wednesday, December 8, 2004

Culinary Fairytale Comments

Rating: 4.6

Festering anger, sitting in a pot
simmering slowly, surface bubbles go pop!
Quietly blurping, suppressing its ooze
stays in the kettle while it stews.
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Adryan Barnathan
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Allan James Saywell 09 December 2004

Adrienne well done a great read flowing till the end, you held it together that takes talent, you made it true, i could feel the burn Regard's AJS

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Kelly Allen Vinal 09 December 2004

A fresh perspective and a funny verse

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