Thursday, December 17, 2009

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i keep bumping into
the same blank wall
wonder who built it?
this stone wall bars
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indira babbellapati
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hmm.. we similar.. i walk into walls too. i think it is because our minds are on higher things. :) .. i believe i can walk through walls, i do all the time. your poem shows the innocence of a child, but at the same time. says tons

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Ranjit Ravindran 17 December 2009

You are always a sweet innocent child...the older you get the sweeter you transform into.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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