Thursday, June 21, 2007

Cuddles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Laying within your arms
Hearing your heart beat
Feeling your warmth envelop me
Our bodies so entwined
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Alison Smith
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Coreena Dejesus 15 March 2008

awww i like these type of poems, wonderful write. I wrote one called cuddling. Hugz! ! CC

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David Harris 01 July 2007

Alison, I loved this from the first line. Simply statement of love throughout. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Oh that poem was so cute. It shows more love than anything I've seen. Great work!

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Lillian J. 21 June 2007

Cute, endearing and full of love....... Lilly :)

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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