Saturday, July 3, 2010

Cuckoos Flown….1306 Comments

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Together the elders and the young,
to splash around or take the plunge.

Farm on Tyne; to the clucking hen?
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Yasmin Khan 18 June 2013

A poignant picture drawn with images for taste buds, pungent and aromatic! lines with underlying meanings: 'Rake up coals till the embers glow.'/ The lounging ones need that bait.'

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Adeline Foster 12 July 2010

It does have a rhythm and a flair. Thanks for the comment. Adeline

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Rinki Nandy 12 July 2010

Dad and mom, lost in their own. Wondering where the cuckoos flown. as we grow old, do things to upset...hurt..careless on our way...to where? our deeds returned one day...lost n abondoned in a viscious cycle...wondering what went wrong? what i lacked? unanswered n puzzled....thanks sharing.

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Subbaraman N V 12 July 2010

I see them flying! Nice write!

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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2010

Wonderful poem with a perfect theme..Great work

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