Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, April 16, 2014

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I may be wrong
But I have never heard such melodies songs
Its presence in air speaks
I feel so high on peak
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi love yours; word flow 27 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi How can I lose something so precious, such is love. last line. ur style. Love always 26 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

I love the abstract feeling! Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

Metaphor really stood as something else Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

not for me. carlos trevizo2 minutes ago didnt hold my interest

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2014

I may be wrong But I have never heart such melodies songs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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