Tuesday, September 15, 2020

Cuckoo Bird At The Kitchen Window Comments

Rating: 4.5

Cuckoo bird was singing the springtime song at the kitchen window
Cooking lady too tried too imitate the tune
Suddenly steel utensil fell from her hand and made jarring sound
Cuckoo bird flew away not frightened by metallic noise
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Bri Edwards 15 September 2020

" Cooking lady too tried too imitate the tune" please proofread and edit do you want: " Cooking lady too TIRED TO imitate.." ? OR " Cooking lady too tried TO imitate.." ? bri ;)

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Sankaran Ayya 17 September 2020

Dear poet Bri Edwards " Cooking lady too TIRED TO imitate.." ? - -yes sir you are absolutely and grammatically correct . , But my defence is this: Bird CUCKOO has double Os COOKING lady has double Os First TOO has double Os All these like James Bond have double Os! Then why should I leave the second to with only one O? Is it FAIR? That is why I awarded generously one more O to to ! Am I wrong sir ?

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Varsha M 15 September 2020

Cuckoo bird never gives the fight but fights for her place till the end. No one can beat her.

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Sankaran Ayya 17 September 2020

Is it ? I have heard cuckoo is absent minded bird and it will lay eggs in crow's nest ! Thank you poet Varsha for informative comment.

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