Cuckoo And The Crow Comments

Yeah u r right d truth is hard n bitter as u say in yor wondrful poem. Pls do read mine too, im yor fellow indian.

The age old story of the cuckoo invading other birds's nests, so true in life. A very good sonnet Atfab.

The poor crow never knows the truth and it happily nurtures the aliens in its nest! The lazy ones thrive on the sweat and labour of the industrious! Every where there is exploitation! The last two lines contain valid truth! Enjoyed! !

you have a variation on topics of ur poems........ dis is also a nice 1

i like the way you construct the poem...it is lovely..like it..

This is an allagory, it is like saying, 'the things people get away with'. Nice poem Aftab.

truth is always harsh. good poem.