Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, October 11, 2009

Cuckoo Comments

Rating: 5.0

All birds are distinct and have special character
We may not find them usually in every sector
They have their own way to serve the mankind
Each one holds prominence and has specialists of its kind
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Prashant Shaurya 13 January 2010

beautiful poem sir.. and the way it proceeds further is superb.. you write with an excellent rhyme and rhythm.. 10++ regards prashant

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Charlotte Andreski 27 December 2009

beautiful words about a beautiful word. breath taking!

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Nathanial Jones 04 November 2009

The Cuckoo is definitely a unique bird, a very original poem... I like it.

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

Cuckoo is black but melody queen Everybody may listen to and very keen Pigeon may be called peace ambassador Cuckoo too may be God’s messenger excellent poem 10++++++++++

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Vinod Kumar 28 October 2009

cuckoo is really a wonderful singer in my tender ages i watched that with eagerly..., thanks for your nature`s tribute, your birth place is also so nice,10++

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 26 October 2009

the melodious sound from a distance was heard, something so unique and lovely was sung by a bird.... nice poem...

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Umesh Lalvani 21 October 2009

Should we feel ashamed of poor parent? Is it the feelings basic inherent?

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Chetna Purohit 21 October 2009

Cuckoo is only one with melodious voice We exclaim and appreciate without any choice

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Pami Panchal 21 October 2009

All birds are distinct and have special character We may not find them usually in every sector

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

I may pray and wish her daily appearance Draw the inspiration with simple inference Should we not shed our daily difference? 10++++++++++

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Daniel Blevins 19 October 2009

This poem is really good! I love the way it flows! And the metaphors you used with the cuckoo! Great write! :)

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Poetic Soul 16 October 2009

A well penned write, we do exclaim and appreciate without any choice indeed.

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Sunita Rao 15 October 2009

All birds are distinct and have special character We may not find them usually in every sector

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Aparna Sinha 15 October 2009

its a complete poem! ...Wordsworth once said a poem should begin with beauty and end with wisdom....and 'this' poem is perfect example....so beautifully penned... Life may be steady with space very slow With melodious voice face may shine and glow And so clear in the message.....

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Your description of 'Cuckoo' makes me love it. I appreciate your pleasing rhymes. a 10

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Connie Tallada 15 October 2009

very well penned...two thumbs up

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bye bye... bye bye 15 October 2009

Pigeon may be called peace ambassador Cuckoo too may be God’s messenger Nicely expressed! All of us, even the 'cuckoos' may sing and praise the Lord and the creation. Each and every one may do it in his own, special way. A nice homage to all the cuckoos, with or without wings! Cuck-koooooo!

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Beautiful poem about a distinctive bird that mankind can revere. My great uncle composed the Cuckoo Waltz in Sweden, so I am biased about the melody of this waltz. 10 love Karin

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Pitilosi Mdala 14 October 2009

powerful stanzas, well organization and co-ordination

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 October 2009

A nice poem on Cuckoo well composed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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