Monday, October 31, 2011

Cubs Vs Cardinals Comments

Rating: 3.1

Through a concrete gate opening
the green field revealed itself.
I remember the white lines too.
Organ music smells hotdog smiles.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 December 2013

Woah nice interesting way u relate d sporty narrative. So were they police sirens? Hey n pls answer my riddles poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 September 2012

the typical scene at and after..it happens everywhere!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 August 2012

the past remebering...so nice and also it's written professionaly good!

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Bulletcookie 2017 20 December 2011

Thanks for the Haiku!

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