Saturday, June 23, 2007

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This is really just a job.

I never think of the perks my job affords me.
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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Very good, I really like this one, but I think some of the wording needs a little polish.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

6. Good use of details. It needs to be made more concise. Some of the statements can be safely cut. (like the 'This is really just a job's.)

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

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