Saturday, February 25, 2012

Crystal Tears Comments

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I've written many words about the loves that I have known...
The heartache that it's cost me, winds of sorrow that have blown...
Too many times, too many hearts, I didn't even own...
And harvested the crops, of the loneliness I've grown...
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Denis Martindale 25 February 2012

You could also consider the last line to end like this: Father, dear Father... please lead me farther on...

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