Thursday, October 8, 2015

Crystal Meets World Comments

Rating: 5.0

When it happened
I thought, lord!
what's the world coming to?
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Nika McGuin
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Daniel Brick 24 October 2015

Your poem is a sensitive way to make us think outside our normal frame of reference. It coaxes us, it invites us, it nudges us in the right direction. But the prose account of what really happened is a slam in the face, like being shaken forcefully. DON'T YOU REALIZE ANYONE CAN BE HIT, AND YOU'RE ANYONE. nOW DO YOU GET IT! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Imagery is floating around wonderful crystal. Really a marvelous work shared here. Nice and smooth....10

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