Crystal is my heart which you broke
shattered into pieces on to the ground
and now I am waiting for you
to glue each pieces back without any gap
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Rini, a clever use of a metaphor. Can love lost be ever put together again.10
Most significantly, you have started your literary journey (here in PH) at right time! Don’t pay attention to trivial matters! I don’t know how long I would be able to continue here but I am sure this is a beautiful literary world with so many nice people around! If you have created a good piece of work, that will get dividend in due course! Pray God provide you enough strength to consolidate your gifted creative talent in penning beautiful poems days ahead! For this poem…10
Dear Rini, this is an emotional write! I feel I should put here some words that could solace your poetic heart! I was browsing a few of your recent poems and found that they are a bit off colour! I don’t know who has broken your heart! But I am sure the person who can break such a delicate heart would never come to mend it! Just forgive and forget! Rini, you are known for writing beautiful poems which are appreciated by many readers! (Cont…)
Hi Rini, Heart break and the need for mending it expressed with true emotions. Good write.
So beautifully written about heartbreak! This is heartfelt throughout every line! Nice work!
I'm out of superlatives for your poems! This one is magical! (Seems I found one more)
Thank you so much kostas..! !