Tuesday, April 17, 2018

Crystal Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crystal is my heart which you broke
shattered into pieces on to the ground
and now I am waiting for you
to glue each pieces back without any gap
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Rini Shibu
COMMENTS
Kostas Lagos 18 April 2018

I'm out of superlatives for your poems! This one is magical! (Seems I found one more)

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Rini Shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you so much kostas..! !

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Robert Murray Smith 18 April 2018

Rini, a clever use of a metaphor. Can love lost be ever put together again.10

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Rini Shibu 18 April 2018

Thanks Robert for reading..! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2018

Most significantly, you have started your literary journey (here in PH) at right time! Don’t pay attention to trivial matters! I don’t know how long I would be able to continue here but I am sure this is a beautiful literary world with so many nice people around! If you have created a good piece of work, that will get dividend in due course! Pray God provide you enough strength to consolidate your gifted creative talent in penning beautiful poems days ahead! For this poem…10

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Rini Shibu 18 April 2018

Thank you so much Dillip for your words of comfort..! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2018

Dear Rini, this is an emotional write! I feel I should put here some words that could solace your poetic heart! I was browsing a few of your recent poems and found that they are a bit off colour! I don’t know who has broken your heart! But I am sure the person who can break such a delicate heart would never come to mend it! Just forgive and forget! Rini, you are known for writing beautiful poems which are appreciated by many readers! (Cont…)

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 April 2018

Hi Rini, Heart break and the need for mending it expressed with true emotions. Good write.

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan...! !

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Aqua Flower 17 April 2018

So beautifully written about heartbreak! This is heartfelt throughout every line! Nice work!

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thanks dear poetess for your remarks..! !

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Lamar Cole 17 April 2018

Great heartfelt poem about crystal heart.

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Rini Shibu 17 April 2018

Thank you so much Lamar for your comment..****

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