Wednesday, January 27, 2021

Crystal Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strutting through a crystal desert, walking into its arid environment pulling water from within every body, dehydrating and leaving them alone.

Letting them wander into and out of cacti standing guard while watching those people who take nothing for granted, yet wanting everything to be handed to them.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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kyvin nash 01 February 2021

The title took me far...though the words cut to the heart! ...good piece!

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Dr. Antony Theodore 29 January 2021

Self is more important than any one else. a fine poem and thoughts. tony

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Dr. Antony Theodore 29 January 2021

Never taking no for an answer, moving on, never really staying anywhere, because they feel self is more important than anyone or thing else.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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