Moss covered stones line the river’s edge,
thus there is no need to dredge.
Water’s flowing swiftly on its way,
for it cannot ever stay.
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Ohhhhh! What a lovely glimps of nature! ! Being snowbound right now, I can't tell you how much this one meant to me Ernestine! ! Many thanks for writing...and for just being YOU! ! Hugs, Dee
Very descriptive and image provoking words employed, nice work. I love it! Lilly :)
Very lovely Ernestine and with a fittingly beautiful title. Thank you very much
Resplendently classic, Northover! You fleck Mother Earth's offspring with dovefeathered stroke. Vivid imagework, and darting vernacular all mesh into one literary burst of compelling work...Young lady, you continue to impress & satisfy. ~ FjcR ~
There is so much beauty in mother nature, especially along the river bank. This is very well written from the heart, and thank you for sharing your journey home with us. This reminds me of my poem 'The River That Flows'., a serene place I used to go in my teens, to ponder, write, and just sit. There is a calm in the water's ripples, and the wildlife that takes advantage of it. I agree with Duncan, you have a talent, so WRITE ON girlfriend. Love & hugs, Barbara
This peice is beautiful, I have a lot of respect for you and your amazing tallent Ernestine Love duncan X
Lovely observations of nature, both lively and restful, I enjoyed this very much. Love from David
Just a wonderful, desciptive work of genius. One for my favourites. Andrew x