Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Crystal Ball Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish, I wish, that I could know
The places I have yet to go
The ways I'll change, the things I'll do
My special dreams, I'll make come true
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Deborah Cromer
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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 August 2009

Fine! Inspiration from within is great! Nice wording! The meaning of the text encompassed plurality that the art deserve! 10+

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Michael Moorcroft 18 August 2009

I enjoyed reading this, short and to the point.10

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Nikunj Sharma 28 July 2009

through the eyes of crystal ball wish I could see it all...............

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Audrey Heller 27 July 2009

Thank you so much, for your lovely critiques. I like your rendition, of Crystal Ball too. It's light and directly, to the point. I think we both get, an A for effort! Audrey Heller

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The Dreamer 25 July 2009

We all wish - and life will deal some good wishes and bad, Hope you get your wish

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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