*.Cryptic Memory.* Comments

perfect writing Elizabeth...I can feel you though your words for they sound so much as my own...life is a reality of both pros an cons..second seems much closer to reality though....your a good writer you show alot of emotion in your words...thanks i plan to read all your poems... ~^..^

I loveee this...it reminds me of some of my internal conflict i like the way you put this in words...the pain..the lies...the fight within yourself...just makes me smile...such a nice intriguing write^^

first you let your heart run free and now all of a sudden your gonna cage it...not a good thing to do...it will just turn to anger n bitterness...good poem though...10+

You have a different style. I liked it.