Cryptic Lipstick Comments

Love this. Love the philosophy and agree whole heartedly.

Heartfelt is all I'm looking for......and maybe a little giggle x Both are found in your beatiful work

Very nice-I love messy poems! The heart is messy and if a poem is a reflection of the heart than it should be too. This reminds me to let my hair down, loose and undone.

The revision fits in very smoothly with the rest. Nice work. I know how frustrating the editing process can be.

I tried to isolate my favorite line and I couldn't. Thats's when I know I've stumbled upon a truely awesome poem. Thanks for sharing. Clever, humorous, witty, simple, true...this poem has personality, and I suspect the writer does too ;)

I tried to isolate my favorite line and I couldn't. Thats's when I know I've stumbled upon a truely awesome poem. Thanks for sharing. Clever, humorous, witty, simple, true...this poem has personality, and I suspect the writer does too ;)

I highly appreciate your suggestion. Lovely poem

I've always preferred the natural look, the natural feel of free form verse- of fashion and makeup, i don't make a fuss, your hair is fine, .and.no, you don't look a mess. Ah, those shoes with that dress, a little less rouge, that lipstick's nice, and it goes with your purse. I can be honest and open with what you got on...You're beautiful in anything you wear, or put on. But I preferr your words naked and raw...To rhyme, or not to rhyme? I simply don't care. Your Ink has captured my heart and invaded my soul- Write on Stivie Taite! You're on such a Roll. ; -) Kelly.

Brilliant Stevie, what a great piece of writing. Very imaginative.