Thursday, October 11, 2012

Cryptic Lipstick Comments

Rating: 3.9

Some poems are simplistic
They don't wear cryptic
lipstick
They never try to force it
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Stevie Taite
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Red O'mara 26 November 2012

Love this. Love the philosophy and agree whole heartedly.

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Ruby Honeytip 24 November 2012

Heartfelt is all I'm looking for......and maybe a little giggle x Both are found in your beatiful work

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Aria Siren 13 November 2012

Very nice-I love messy poems! The heart is messy and if a poem is a reflection of the heart than it should be too. This reminds me to let my hair down, loose and undone.

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Alla Simone 17 October 2012

The revision fits in very smoothly with the rest. Nice work. I know how frustrating the editing process can be.

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Alla Simone 16 October 2012

I tried to isolate my favorite line and I couldn't. Thats's when I know I've stumbled upon a truely awesome poem. Thanks for sharing. Clever, humorous, witty, simple, true...this poem has personality, and I suspect the writer does too ;)

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Alla Simone 16 October 2012

I tried to isolate my favorite line and I couldn't. Thats's when I know I've stumbled upon a truely awesome poem. Thanks for sharing. Clever, humorous, witty, simple, true...this poem has personality, and I suspect the writer does too ;)

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Asif Andalib 15 October 2012

I highly appreciate your suggestion. Lovely poem

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Kelly Seale 12 October 2012

I've always preferred the natural look, the natural feel of free form verse- of fashion and makeup, i don't make a fuss, your hair is fine, .and.no, you don't look a mess. Ah, those shoes with that dress, a little less rouge, that lipstick's nice, and it goes with your purse. I can be honest and open with what you got on...You're beautiful in anything you wear, or put on. But I preferr your words naked and raw...To rhyme, or not to rhyme? I simply don't care. Your Ink has captured my heart and invaded my soul- Write on Stivie Taite! You're on such a Roll. ; -) Kelly.

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Valerie Dohren 11 October 2012

Brilliant Stevie, what a great piece of writing. Very imaginative.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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