Friday, May 29, 2009

Crying Wolf. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eerie howling, wolfhound calling.
Amber eyes alight.
Spirit of the deepest forest.
Stealthy pads the night.
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Pressured lifestyle, fragile living. Species on the wane. Now mere myth and legend honour Wolf of prairie fame.... good write dear.I appricaite it.....g ood write with solid words...10 ryingwolf means foul shout for help...but i suggest u read mine'cry not'

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Juneil Sechico 12 June 2009

what a nice piece ageless friend! this is the piece what i want to write! I love the message of this piece and the reality stated! The situation of this writing sometimes happen in humans especially in our country! nice write Fay!

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Aijaz Asif 09 June 2009

a very touching and inspiring write indeed with very nice and heart felt flow, i loved it, thank 10++++++ rgds asif

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Sandra Fowler 08 June 2009

A great tribute to these fiercely, beautiful creatures who have suffered such a tragic fate. Your compassion resonates. Wonderful write, Fay. Always your friend, Sandra

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Bob Gibson 08 June 2009

Woodland forests have given way To leisure pursuits' that people play motocross on woodland fells can no one hear! the alarm bells? another great poem Fay, and a very sobering one at that regards Bob

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Sid John Gardner. 07 June 2009

There was talk about re-introducing wolves into the West highlands of Scotland but the Scottish RSPCA got it stopped on grounds of danger and cruelty..'To the wolves'..Someone told them there were gangs of marauding Glaswegian drunken campers prowling about at night in the highland forests. Sid x

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Ron Flowers 07 June 2009

A beautifully written commentary on the decline of, not only the wolf, but much of nature. A 10. Ron

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Surya . 07 June 2009

deep and meaningfull.posted10 surya

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fay this is very real and touches deep. we as man do so much hardm to the innocent creatures.

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Susan Jarvis 05 June 2009

Your beguiling title gives way to a superb tribute to an awesome creature. S :)

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

nice beautiful piece indeed..very much like the earlier one i read..never get fed up of this.. thanks Fay best wishes shan

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Herbert Nehrlich2 31 May 2009

Perfect presentation with social comment, another gem of course. Hxx

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Alf Hutchison 30 May 2009

Fay this is tremendous...soon there will indeed be no wildlife left.regards Alf 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 May 2009

The big bad wolf, well they say that dogs are wolves tamed by stone age people and what loyal friends and pets they can be, it's the bad press I guess they get... Andy 10

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Fiona Davidson 29 May 2009

Excellent poem Fay...wolves seem to have a mystical side to them don't they, and you have captured that in your write...Fi 10+++

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Tsira Goge 29 May 2009

Stealthy pads the night. ................................. Fay, It sounds very beautifully...10... Tsira

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Sue Sie 29 May 2009

An excellent poem Fay..., yes..its a shame that we only see some of these animals in 'captivity'....10++ Sue

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