Sunday, November 15, 2009

Crying Soul Comments

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My soul
Is crying out
For someone to help it
It cannot take
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Allison Unknown
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Lushan Marie 24 November 2009

This is my favourite so far. :)

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I think if anyone was in your shoes, they'd probably fall flat on their face. I hope you keep fighting through the pain, even though it probably seems unbareable. I love how you wrote straight from the pain, like the cries are coming out of the poem.

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