Thursday, July 16, 2009

Crying Shoulder Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm happy whenever she's sad
When she and her boyfriend have a fight
Cause she'll come to cry on my shoulder
Feeling so good, hope it will be forever
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Lycko Chizo
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I'm happy whenever she's sad When she and her boyfriend have a fight Cause she'll come to cry on my shoulder Feeling so good, hope it will be forever That's the only chance she stay by my side The only time that I feel she was mine lovely but honest desire on your part but i must admire your inner feeling...beautiful write..19 read mine cry not.... come home and home bound..anywhere

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Rhonda Moody 25 July 2009

Its sad to be selfish but love does strange things to people.. Knowing you love her like that and she dont realize it... Good job.. kept me interested..10

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yellowbell alamanda 25 July 2009

oh! you almost made me cry! i missed my crying shoulder, and the one who cried on my shoulder! i give you 10 votes. write more. this one is good heart breaking. good job!

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Tracey Wynn 25 July 2009

This is an unique take on this. Your happy when she is upset and sad, thats different. You wrote this nicely and expressed it very well. I give you a 10.

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Christina Phan 25 July 2009

I hope she come back and cry once again on your shoulder You are so caring and being there when she cry 10+++ Fanastic write

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Lycko Chizo

Lycko Chizo

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