Friday, May 30, 2008

Crying Rube Tears In Ballet Slippers Comments

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Spinning on my toe,
Quickly, round and round i go.
My ankles are bleeding but i dont care.
My courage is gone, leaving only despair.
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Ashley burnam
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Bonnie Collins 30 May 2008

This is filled with so many depressing emotions, yet your imagery really leaves the reader filled with so much sorrow for your feelings... This is very good... The structure you carry this into its final stanza.... Very heartbreaking..... Bonnie

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