Spinning on my toe,
Quickly, round and round i go.
My ankles are bleeding but i dont care.
My courage is gone, leaving only despair.
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This is filled with so many depressing emotions, yet your imagery really leaves the reader filled with so much sorrow for your feelings... This is very good... The structure you carry this into its final stanza.... Very heartbreaking.....
Bonnie
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This is filled with so many depressing emotions, yet your imagery really leaves the reader filled with so much sorrow for your feelings... This is very good... The structure you carry this into its final stanza.... Very heartbreaking..... Bonnie