Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Crying Out For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

You see me on the floor, tears rolling down my face.
You look at me for a split second and then turn away.
I beg for you not to leave but you show no interest to stay.
You walk out the door without a word or a last look.
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Tracey Owens
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Lycko Chizo 24 July 2009

I love the how you portray sadness in this poem...it was realistic and heart melting. Again 10! W8, f0rgot to say It's a masterpiece! Congratulation.

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Once you left, I was alone in this big room. I cried out for you, but there was no answer........ so pathetic views but in beautifully woven words... i like it.... you deserve 10 for it read mine'Cry not: ' and brown eyes

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this is excellent.......your best poem.

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Shilpa Luthra 23 June 2009

simply amazing......10+++ very beautiful crafted

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