Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Crying Out Comments

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Im sick of all the lies.
Im sick of the tears you've made me cry.

You say 'lets forgive and forget'
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Crystle Jones
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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

A nice poem well compose good job.......

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Nooruddeen Mm 24 November 2009

Dear Crystal A real good poem filled with sincere words. No artificiality at all. Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

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Keith Hendrickson 24 November 2009

a great piece of writing. i can definitly tell its from the heart. the only thing is the last line you say ''my worst defeat'' you shouldnt ever give up or accept defeat. if you think something is worth fighting for than fight 4 it. but at the same time if your fighting for something that isnt willing to give that same passion back than that is a useless fight. peace an love, keith

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