The night it was pouring
I sat by my bed
Hoping to find answers
That grew in my head
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beautiful delivery dear poetess, enjoyed reading it again and again, especially the last two lines.
Like the famous song says: Big Girls Don't Cry but you did and so the heavens cried too along with you! Beauty and Talent magically merged in this beautiful write embedded with touching rhyming words and rich imagery! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
beautiful rhyming piece to your credit.... using simple English and creating such a beauty is masterly wow you
We've still got bucketfuls of the stuff here in GB, so if I want to have a jolly good cry, no-one would know! ! Seriously though Meena, this is a lovely poem, very well written and the rhyming is just great, so it's well done you and a 10.
nice visuals..good rhyming scheme..the flow of emotions and grief is visible..this is really good.. :) nice.. :)
A good one for my afternoon. well said.