Friday, March 26, 2010

Crying In My Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today i greeted the sky
with such heavy eyes
though hard i tried
i know that i couldn't lie
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Shaikyu Yun
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fleur de lys 03 May 2010

Perfect description of a benevolent presence that looks down on us all. I could sense the comfort and love of such beautiful moments.

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beautifully penned.. like the way you set the words. keep writing..would love to read more of you - M.S.

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