Crying For Her… Comments

Crying for her is exactly what your poem does in addition to, exploring the den that creatures lie in wait for their prey. Meanwhile, you're doing the same for self. Poets seems to dare go places in the mind and soul that other fear...we seem to have a 'Dying' need to do so. Keep writing.

this poem is so good. i really enjoy the scooby doo line... great work: -)

Suicide is never the answer! ! But, the poem shows deep emotion and expresses your love pretty clearly. I really like the scooby line......funny :) The more you write, the more you will learn about yourself and self exploration is a wonderful thing....writing is an awesome outlet. Adalie

A desperate cry for help. A very painfull but passionate poem.