Tuesday, December 26, 2017

Crying For A Fractured World Comments

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I look through a fractured looking glass
At the broken world all around me.
At the wars, the famine war brings and
The despair of people fleeing their homes.
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David Wood
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2017

A beautifully crafted write. The flow and symmetry are great. A great piece that captures the flaws in our society specially on the matter of climate change.

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Hazel Durham 26 December 2017

The world is full of greed, corruption and lies as the photos in the news display all the injustices, poverty and the climate change effecting animals habitats and yes I do cry too. For the powers of this world do turn away and walk away, but I do know there is a lot of good people trying to change the world for the better so hopefully maybe one day we will all smile again! Powerful and the truth so beautifully written!

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