Crying Fire Comments
</>Fire is crying with
Simple voice
In the black smith`s yard
With red crop cutter
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great personification sir... well come to think of it. fire is very lively thing indeed! ! ! .. this is very different poem and nice poem indeed..10+ with love shan
Fire is Laughing with The smiling lips Round the clock with Blessing joy and cool........ beautiful write with eye catching imagination... fire is sour of power and we owe complete existence... what a deep thinking and carefull wording... i loved it....10
fire is essence of life with so many functions.nice. posted 10 love®ards surya
Fire is a great theme and love the extremes you have created with your excellent imagery. Karin Anderson
your poetic imaginations fire the readers down, Vinod...each stanza holds a seperate image unique and good...10
nice poem...... especially i like the last para.... simple and fire in poem........ 10
Extraordinary imagery. Reminds me of the fine Chinese poets I read with such pleasure in, 'The World Poets Quarterly'.. Kindest regards, Sandra
Excellent write vinu...enjoyed the read...thank you...Fi...10++
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7/19/2025 12:19:48 PM # 1.0.0
The flames of tears are burning liquid fire. Well done my friend.