I heard him again
His cry, his pain
He's calling for help
But he cannot be saved
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well done it reminds me of my ''WHO DARES? '' u should read it and tell me if u agree or disagreee
You might want to consider improving your grammar and verse style but surely it is fine but still i giggle at the childishness. Anyway good poem I hope the father stops beating him for sure. I was wondering on what terms is the poetry laid on is at ode or an elegy or just something which came into your brilliant mind?