Once the color of the night,
graced in starry skies
The full moon left little to wonder
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This is a piece that reflects well on its title. The writer delivers, in candor, The framework of africa at this moment. One of poetry's responsibilities. Well done, and well worth the read. GW62
I do think I will read all your writes so far, your youthful touch just pours over.. Excellent! ! !
Very good poem you have written here Konye full of youthful passion for your great Continent of Africa you can be one of the future voices of Africa if so you wish to be keep on keeping on
Another boldly descriptive piece of writing, Konye. Your pen drips courage in the face of such grande injustice. Continue to put your words to 'paper' as that is where the healing begins. Linda :)
Your content is O.K., but you should make the rhythm smoother.
great poem :) really great. read it for an ap lit paper, and i dont regret doing it.