Monday, December 31, 2012

Crying Comments

Rating: 5.0

All our children crying
Their stomaches are relying
But their parent's are fighting
With the stress of surviving
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colinb bradley
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Lyn Paul 24 March 2013

A great write.statements so worth making.

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Sandy Player 01 January 2013

It reads and moves forward with the sound of crying in-between the lines, a characteristic of the writing style.

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