Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Crying Comments

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crying in the far dark land
tears there are more than sand
Alone and no one is there to hear
no one think or even feel
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Wassila Nader
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Mg Confused 31 August 2012

dnt be sad anymore...its life and v have to win it..so..smile.poem s nyc

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Abdullah Musa 29 August 2012

Just like ur poem, sad and nice. life treats us the same way. tnx for sharing

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Unwritten Soul 28 August 2012

First, this is a good and heartfelt poem second, depression is a deep hurtful sensation what you need is to be strong and know the meaning of destiny life journey is so mystery but it can be a good suprise waiting in some part just have no worry for everyday, just wish and pray always okay let you soul soaked in the best way calm and happy may someday you will know that pain is okay it's part of life and never turn back to find hurt be positive and carry faith within, stop crying just waiting waiting for the correct time where all desired come as u imagine _Unwritten Soul

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