Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Crying Comments

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Brown eyes sealed over with wetness.
walls brought down so no one can get close.
her black mascera leaving streaks down her face.
puddles forming on the cold hard floor
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Nicole Gehrman
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I like the ending. It's kinda eerie, but cool. This is really emotional, and I love all the emotion you put into it. I hope the girl isn't too far lost in the sadness. I know how easy it is to do that.

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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