Monday, November 3, 2008

Crying Comments

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weakness' hiding themselve to the world
they were held prisoners against their will
they had no choice but to stay kept inside
for the captors fear of letting them kno, of letting them show
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Kacey Hauck
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weakness' hiding themselve to the world they were held prisoners against their will it is weakness that makes us cry.... but we should control it otherewise it will briang shame on us... very good write i must say...10 read mine.... cry not....miss i miss u.... butterflies around and o, mother

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

top 2 bottom another GREAT piece of work. you are very talented 4 sure

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I love the lightness and the imagery. Great Job

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