Does the weather make me suffer more than anyone
Was a dark cloud assigned to hound me
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I am in a way I am a cry baby too ma'am.. I mean when I start to whine and moan, I become a real pain to every one.. In fact, when I expressed a bitter xp through a poem people come and say my writing is good...some can't understand the emotions in my poems... And I should make the same comment too... I mean you do write good... poetry is something that is filled with emotions.. when write from your heart, more often than not you will come up with something good... writing is a good way to let your emotions out.. love shan
It would seem that you have suffered from the effects of some very lowering weather. But I am sure that poetry will find you in every season. Excellent write, Warm regards, Sandra
amazing thought, great write, you do have a flair for symbolism