Monday, January 26, 2009

Cry To The Cold Comments

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Can people just stop wishing that what they had was more,
when actually they have the things that people have died for.
Can't you see you burn to the core,
can't you see you burn to the core.
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Elbert Matt Loubser
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Jessica Kissner 01 June 2010

I love your poem. The repeat makes it sound so pushed that it stays in my mind even after reading it!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 January 2009

Life is precious but time is jealous on us.

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